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letter to complain a college accomodation officer for arrangements.

letter to complain a college accomodation officer for arrangements. LB10G

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to make few complains about the arrangements of my dormitory. I am a graduate student of this college and I belong to a small town which is quite far from here. As a student, I am expected to get good grades in exams and for that reason, a quiet and comfortable environment is required. I would like to tell you about some issues I have been facing since I have reached here. Firstly, I have a roommate and we are sharing everything in a room. She belongs to a different city. She has a huge social circle and her friends are visiting her almost everyday and it gets very uncomfortable for me to study. Our room is a total mess because of her friends eating and drinking there and never cleaning the room. Our bathroom is untidy all the time. In such a scenario, studying and working gets impossible for me. I have spoken to her about this but she did not care. I humbly request you to kindly provide me a comfortable place to live and work. If possible, kindly change my roommate or give me a single room. I am willing to pay more for that. Your support and cooperation would be highly appreciated. Your's Faithfully, Saher.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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good
 grades in exams and for that reason, a quiet and comfortable environment is required
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. Our bathroom is untidy all the time. In such a scenario, studying and working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
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I humbly
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 my roommate or give me a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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. I am willing to pay more for that.

Your support and cooperation would be highly
 appreciated.

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Faithfully
,

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