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Letter to a recruiter for a voluntary position

Letter to a recruiter for a voluntary position JwkG0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to a recent advertisement for a voluntary position in Times Now published on 01 November to teach English overseas. As you can see from my CV, I have a bachelor’s degree in English literature and have an experience of 2 years working with a local school. I am looking for a job where I can use my existing knowledge and skills to help students learn this language. This is a great opportunity where I can not only do voluntary work, but also gain some insight about foreign culture. I feel that I would be able to contribute to this task as I am a native speaker and have studied this language since childhood. My existing experience is also be useful as I know how to handle students of different ages. If you find my profile suitable for this position, please contact me to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my profile with you personally. Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to a recent advertisement for a voluntary position in Times
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Now
published on 01 November to teach English overseas.

As you can
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see
from my CV, I have a bachelor’s degree in English literature and have an experience of 2 years working with a local school. I am looking for a job where I can
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use
my existing knowledge and
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skills
to
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help
students learn this language. This is a great opportunity where I can not
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only
do voluntary work,
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but
also
gain
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some
insight about foreign culture.

I feel that I would be able to contribute to this task as I am a native speaker and have studied this language since childhood. My existing experience is
also
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be
useful as I know how to handle students of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ages.

If you find my profile suitable for this position,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact me to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my profile with you
personally
.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to a recruiter for a voluntary position

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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