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Letter to a Friend about commuting

Letter to a Friend about commuting JVX6e
Dear Irene, From your letter which I received yesterday, I’m very much excited to hear the news that you are coming to my city for work. You’ve informed me that you will be assuming job in ‘The Oracle’, at the heart of the city; you should really need to consider living with me at my home, just 5 km away from your workplace. We do have a well-connected metro rail, which connects almost all the major areas of city, and this makes our commuting easy, cheap and convenient. Most companies provide cab transport for their employees here who are into nightshift. The best thing I can assure you that you will be having a bunch of friends here, those who stay in my apartment. I know you will really enjoy socializing with them and will hang around. We also have a club to which I can arrange a membership for you. Awaiting your arrival, Regards, Teena
Dear Irene,

From your letter which I received yesterday, I’m
very
much excited to hear the news that you are coming to my city for work.

You’ve informed me that you will be assuming job in ‘The Oracle’, at the heart of the city; you should
really
need to consider living with me at my home,
just
5 km away from your workplace.

We do have a well-connected metro rail, which connects almost all the major areas of city, and this
makes
our commuting easy,
cheap
and convenient. Most
companies
provide cab transport for their employees here who are into
nightshift
.

The best thing I can assure you that you will be having a bunch of friends here, those who stay in my apartment. I know you will
really
enjoy socializing with them and will hang around. We
also
have a club to which I can arrange a membership for you.

Awaiting your arrival,

Regards,

Teena
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IELTS letter Letter to a Friend about commuting

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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