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Your friend invited you to go on holiday with her in the countryside at the weekend. Write a letter either to accept or refuse her invitation.

Your friend invited you to go on holiday with her in the countryside at the weekend. Write a letter either to accept or refuse her invitation. 6mw3j
Dear Jenny, It was great to get your letter. Thanks a lot for your invitation. It sounds like I’m going to have a wonderful holiday in the stunning countryside. Well, I’d be very delighted to visit that place with you at the weekend. You know I just went through a truly difficult end-of-term exam and I didn’t get the test results as I expected even though I studied very hard. So I think it’ll be better if I go on this trip before returning to my class; actually, I hope it would be wonderful to improve my mood. Also, could you tell me how we will get there? Which place are we going to visit first? Honestly, I’m keen on seeing areas which are said to be picturesque with lots of activities coming up. Anyway, many thanks for your great idea. Looking forward to seeing you then. Best wishes,
Dear Jenny,

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delighted to visit that place with you
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; actually, I hope it would be wonderful to
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there? Which place are we going to visit
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thanks for your great
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. Looking forward to seeing you then.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter Your friend invited you to go on holiday with her in the countryside at the weekend. Write a letter either to accept or refuse her invitation.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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