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Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter

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Dear Sir or Madam, It has come to my knowledge that some members of the city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. I understand that this decision will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use roads freely and more safely. However, I must explain my point of view in this matter. When I first heard about this new idea, in my monthly block meeting, some ideas came along. I believe, that beside the already stated positive impact of this plan, some others are a great incentive, for instance, possible extra excercise. However, the negative aspects must be taken into considerantion as well. Firstly, all the workers on the area will be forced to use public transit, which will lead to higher number of people on the subway. In addition, considering COVID 19, the number of possible exposures will dramatically increase in an already over exposed area. It is my opinion, that eventhough, this is a very interesting plan for the future, right now it is not a good plan. Once the pandemic is over, this can be used as a novel strategy to increase excercise and networking with peers. I sincerely hope you will take my opinion into consideration. Best Regards Judith Castillo
Dear Sir or Madam,

It has
come
to my knowledge that
some
members of the city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. I understand that this decision will
allow
pedestrians and bicyclists to
use
roads
freely
and more
safely
.
However
, I
must
explain
my point of view in this matter. When I
first
heard about this new
idea
, in my monthly block meeting,
some
ideas
came along. I believe, that beside the already stated
positive
impact of this plan,
some
others are a great incentive,
for instance
, possible extra
excercise
.
However
, the
negative
aspects
must
be taken
into
considerantion
as well
.
Firstly
, all the workers on the area will
be forced
to
use
public transit, which will lead to higher number of
people
on the subway.
In addition
, considering
COVID 19
, the number of possible exposures will
dramatically
increase in an already over exposed area.

It is my opinion, that
eventhough
, this is a
very
interesting plan for the future, right
now
it is not a
good
plan. Once the pandemic is over, this can be
used
as a novel strategy to increase
excercise
and networking with peers.

I
sincerely
hope you will take my opinion into consideration.

Best Regards

Judith Castillo
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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