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email about inquiry of the backstop

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Hi Corey, Well noted on the tags that need to be included. For backstop as per checking we have three different sizes – 1095 (2qty), 1125 and 1145 and base on the IOM, preservation activity for backstop is needed if it will be stored more than six months. I already added in the preservation matrix also. For spares I may need it around November. As for now I am more focused with the preservation activity of every tag items. Thanks!
Hi Corey,

Well noted on the tags that need to
be included
. For backstop as per checking we have three
different
sizes
1095 (2qty), 1125 and 1145 and base on the IOM, preservation activity for backstop
is needed
if it will
be stored
more than six months. I already
added
in the preservation matrix
also
.

For
spares I
may need it around November. As for
now
I am more focused with the preservation activity of every tag items. Thanks!
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IELTS letter email about inquiry of the backstop

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  American English
3 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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