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Letter to a friend about a museum or gallery you visited recently -Why you went to the museum or gallery -What you saw -Why you do/ do not recommend it

Letter to a friend about a museum or gallery you visited recently -Why you went to the museum or gallery -What you saw -Why you do/ do not recommend it 8Q3xm

Dear John, I hope you are keeping well and safe. I am writing this letter to give you some interesting detail about the museum which I have visited last Saturday, situated in the Center of Dubai City. Let me explain the purpose of visiting, my 7 years daughter has to do some assignment assigned by her school and I have to take her to the museum. First of all, I found the museum comparatively attractive as it was made with cutting-edge technology. Further, my daughter has a chance to learn history, like traditional old coins, Mosa Lisa painting, and many more, which she couldn’t know if she has not visited it for assignment reasons. I know you have an 8 years old daughter and I would be glad if you also take her to the Art gallery as she will learn many traditional things and it will be good for her future prospect as well. I would like to meet you soon to tell you more about the museum. Your Lovingly Sharyar Yousaf af

Dear John,

I hope you are keeping well and safe. I am writing this letter to give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 interesting detail about the museum which I have visited last Saturday, situated in the Center of Dubai City.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the purpose of visiting, my 7 years daughter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 assignment assigned by her school and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take her to the museum.

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First of all
, I found the museum comparatively
 attractive as it was made
 with cutting-edge technology. Further
, my daughter has a chance to learn history, like traditional This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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Mosa
 Lisa painting, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more, which she couldn’t know if she has not visited it for assignment reasons.

I know you have an 8 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 daughter and I would be glad if you also
 take her to the Art gallery as she will learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 traditional things and it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for her future prospect as well
.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you more about the museum.

Your Lovingly


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Sharyar
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Yousaf


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