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Letter of application for a part-time job

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I am writing to apply for a part-time job at your company as was advertised on an internet site "Online work" on May, 17. I studied philology science and received an honored degree from Ferghana State University which is a helpful means for this post. I have enough experience in writing because of my previous work in the department store as a contender. I was engaged in advertising store products. I consider myself as an eligible candidate for the vacancy since I possess excellent proficiency on the Android system, the ability to create real authorized articles, rewriting, pen scripts for reklams and announcements which allows me to depict myself as a professional employee. I can start work immediately. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Natasha Khan.
I am writing to apply for a part-time job at your
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company
as
was advertised
on an internet site
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Online work
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"
on May, 17.

I studied philology science and received an honored degree from
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Ferghana
State University which is a helpful means for this post.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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enough
experience in writing
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because
of my previous work in the department store as a contender.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was engaged
in advertising store products.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
consider myself as an eligible candidate for the vacancy since I possess excellent proficiency on the Android system, the ability to create real authorized articles, rewriting, pen scripts for
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reklams
and announcements which
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allows
me to depict myself as a professional employee.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can
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start
work immediately.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Natasha Khan.

IELTS letter Letter of application for a part-time job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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