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A letter: A problem There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it. Write your letter

A letter: A problem There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it. Write your letter RNxDk
Dear council, To start with, I am a civil from your city, and I writte this letter to inform you about a problems that is happening in the street I live in. The problem started two weeks ago. It seems like we have a plague of rats here. In adition the street started to smeel really awful since the rats appeared. Could you make something to fix it? The neighbours and I had been trying to capture the rats but we need professional help. We hope you will be able to send us a company that can fix the problem. Moreover, in my opinion I think you should send somebody else too look after the bad odor. Lots of rewars, Lisa.
Dear council,

To
start
with, I am a civil from your city, and I
writte
this letter to inform you about
a problems
that is
happening in the street I
live
in.

The problem
started
two weeks ago. It seems like we have a plague of rats here. In
adition
the street
started
to
smeel
really
awful since the rats appeared.

Could you
make
something to
fix
it? The
neighbours
and I had been trying to capture the rats
but
we need professional
help
. We hope you will be able to
send
us a
company
that can
fix
the problem.
Moreover
, in my opinion I
think
you should
send
somebody else
too look
after the
bad
odor.

Lots of
rewars
, Lisa.
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IELTS letter A letter: A problem There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it. Write your letter

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  American English
5 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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