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Letter is of Requesting information letter

Letter is of Requesting information letter 73YnY

Dear Sir or MadamI have read your advertisement in "Times" of January 5th in 2021 and would like to participate in this seminar. I am planning to be a manager in the future and that's why I found this advertisement important. I have read your advertisement but I am not sure if you would have explained about it in a detail. I would be grateful whether you could tell me what the price is. I would also like to know more details about the seminar. It would be better receive it as soon as possible but not later than a week before flight. You could send me the above -mentioned information to my e-mail or a fax. I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfullyJames Bond.

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