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Imagine that you have one of the problems below. Write a letter similar to the one above to Ms Brown for advice on a suitable course and get further information.

Imagine that you have one of the problems below. Write a letter similar to the one above to Ms Brown for advice on a suitable course and get further information. q09ld
november 7th, 2021 dear miss brown, i am writing to enquire about the skills for " suffering from stress" you advertised in teenage magazine. i am a student in a nguyen than hien highschool in ha tienpronvince. due to the influence of covid-19, i had to study online about 3 month. after learning online, because of the pressure by teachers give too much homework, i feel tired, worry, can't concentrate and have memory problems. beside, i have dificulty in communicating ideas or opinion. could you advise me which of the courses should take? i would like to know when the course will be started. thope that your answers to my questions wil help me to make th right decision about the course. thank you very much for your time. i look forward to hearing from you. sincerly,
november
7th, 2021 dear miss brown,
i
am writing to
enquire
about the
skills
for
"
suffering from
stress
"
you advertised in teenage magazine.
i
am a student in a
nguyen
than
hien
highschool
in ha
tienpronvince
.
due
to the influence of
covid-19
,
i
had to study online about 3
month
.
after
learning online,
because
of the pressure by teachers give too much homework,
i
feel tired, worry, can't concentrate and have memory problems.
beside
,
i
have
dificulty
in communicating
ideas
or opinion.
could
you advise me which of the courses should take?
i
would like to know when the course will be
started
.
thope
that your answers to my questions
wil
help
me to
make
th
right decision about the course.
thank
you
very
much for your time.
i
look forward to hearing from you.
sincerly
,
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IELTS letter Imagine that you have one of the problems below. Write a letter similar to the one above to Ms Brown for advice on a suitable course and get further information.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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