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Letter is for Job application letter

Letter is for Job application letter 5aDlp
Dear Sir or MadamI would like to apply for the position of the chain which was advertised in "Times" of November 18th 2021. I graduated from the University of Western Australia in 2016 with degree Bakhelor. For the past four years I've worked as manager in a big company which is located in the western Australia. I consider myself to be reliable, hard-working and enthusiastic. And also taklking in Spanish and French are easy for me. If you mind my skills and experiences suitable please contact me to schedule an interview. You can contact me with the following number +998901187842 or it will be better if you send message to my nagmetullayeva@ mail. address. Kind regardsJames Bond
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
would like to apply for the position of the chain which
was advertised
in
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Times
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"
of November 18th 2021. I graduated from the University of Western Australia in 2016 with degree
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Bakhelor
. For the past four years I've worked as manager in a
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big
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company
which
is located
in the
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western Australia
. I consider myself to be reliable,
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hard
-working and enthusiastic. And
also
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taklking
in Spanish and French are easy for me. If you mind my
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skills
and experiences suitable
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please
contact me to schedule an interview. You can contact me with the following number +998901187842 or it will be better if you
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send
message to my
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nagmetullayeva@
mail.
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address
. Kind
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regardsJames
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Bond

IELTS letter Letter is for Job application letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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