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your friend is agreeing to look after your house and pet

your friend is agreeing to look after your house and pet XGJmw

Dear Samira, I hope that you are doing well at your place. I feel so relieved that you are agreeing to look after my house and my pet in my absence. I would like to thank you for that and also inform you some paramount chores that you should take care of. First of all, you can message me at any moment on my whatsapp or Instagram, i will check my messages regularly. But if in any emergency, feel free to call me anytime on my personal number. Moreover, you have to fed my cat twice a day. I have already kept the cat food in the front cupboard, which is easy for u to find it. Finally, make sure that she drinks plenty of water everyday and milk too once in a day. Furthermore, as you know, i love my plants so it would be grateful if you will water my plants every evening. Please check my mailbox daily and also keep the lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Best wishes, Ema

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.SamaraSamir
Samira
, I hope that you are doing well at your place. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 relieved that you The verb 'agreeing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are agreeing
 to look after my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and my pet in my absence. I would like to thank you for that and also
 inform you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 paramount chores that you should take care of. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, you can message me at any moment on my Possible spelling mistake found.WhatsAppwhats app
whatsapp
 or Instagram, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my messages regularly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if in any emergency, feel free to call me anytime on my personal number. Moreover
, you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 fed my cat twice a day. I have already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 the cat food in the front cupboard, which is easy for u to find it. Finally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that she drinks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of water 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 and milk too once in a day. Furthermore
, as you know, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my plants This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it would be grateful if you will water my plants every evening. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my mailbox daily and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Best wishes, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphEma.Ema!Ema?Ema:Ema,Ema;
Ema