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write complaint letter about the product you bought last month. Tel them about problems and ask to get refund

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I am writing to you regarding a Samsung cleaner that I bought at your department store in Blackyard street, on the 5th of December. The Vacuum cleaner seemed to work fine in the shop. However, upon returning home, it became clear that the power button was not functioning properly. In addition to this, there was a noise while it was plugging in. I therefore returned to the shop the following day, on the 6th of December, and told to the company's representative about the issue. I left the product with the assistant, and they assured me that they would look into the problem with a view to repairing it and get back to me a few days later. However, it was now been one week and while I contacted to the shop again, they said that the tool had still been fixed, and they did not know how long it would be. As I am sure, you will comprehend, it is not acceptable to be waiting for a such long time. I would therefore like to request that I would be given a full refund should I not received my item by the end of the week I look forward to hearing from you.
I am writing to you regarding a Samsung cleaner that I
bought
at your department store in
Blackyard
street, on the 5th of December.

The Vacuum cleaner seemed to work fine in the shop.
However
, upon returning home, it became
clear
that the power button was not functioning
properly
.
In addition
to this, there was a noise while it was plugging in.

I
therefore
returned to the shop the following day, on the 6th of December, and
told
to the
company
's representative about the issue. I
left
the product with the assistant, and they assured me that they would look into the problem with a view to repairing it and
get
back to me a few days later.

However
, it was
now
been one week and while I contacted to the shop again, they said that the tool had
still
been
fixed
, and they did not know how long it would be.

As I am sure, you will comprehend, it is not acceptable to be waiting for a such long time. I would
therefore
like to request that I would be
given
a full refund should I not received my item by the
end
of the
week


I look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter write complaint letter about the product you bought last month. Tel them about problems and ask to get refund

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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