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Dear Bean, Thank you for your letter. It is so nice to get some news about your computer. It was interesting to read it. You want to know more about the role of computers in my life. I agree with you that our life would be impossible without computers. This device is very important to me and it makes my life easier and very interesting. Sometimes search for the information in the Internet chatting with my friends online. Besides, I like playing one game on my computer called "Free Fire". It is shouter Battleground which is popular over the world. As for me, it is a real problem when my computer is out of order. My uncle is programmer so he usually helps me with it. Write back soon! Best wishes, Your best friendSaid.
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IELTS letter about computers and their role

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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