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Last month you went on a holiday with your friends and stayed at their house. they sent you holiday photos. write a letter to thank them for photos and holiday explain why did not write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you went on a holiday with your friends and stayed at their house. they sent you holiday photos. write a letter to thank them for photos and holiday explain why did not write earlier invite them to come and stay with you QaJL
Dear John, Hope you are doing great. I'm writing this letter to thank you for inviting me on the holiday we spend last summer. It was an amazing experience with you and marshall. I cannot express my emotions in the letter on how I felt in the trip. I would like to apologize for not writing this letter earlir. As I was busy in the jobs, as soon as I arrived from vacation I had to be involved in a project which went till last week. Next month, I'm going to get engaged and I want you and marshall to join me on this auspicious occasion. I want you to come a week before so that we can plan on engagement ceromony. Waiting for your reply Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear John,

Hope you are doing great. I'm writing this letter to thank you for inviting me on the holiday we spend last summer.

It was an amazing experience with you and
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marshall
. I cannot express my emotions in the letter on how I felt in the trip.

I would like to apologize for not writing this letter
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earlir
. As I was busy in the jobs, as
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soon
as I arrived from vacation I had to
be involved
in a project which went till last week.

Next
month, I'm going to
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get
engaged and I want you and
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marshall
to
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join
me on this auspicious occasion. I want you to
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come
a week
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before
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so
that we can plan on engagement
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ceromony
.

Waiting for your reply

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Last month you went on a holiday with your friends and stayed at their house. they sent you holiday photos. write a letter to thank them for photos and holiday explain why did not write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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