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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take WarD
Dear Mr. Jourge, I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot continue my part-time course because I am doing my full-time job in the Human Resources department. Nowadays, we are hiring candidates in bulk positions and it is my task with the deadline and I cannot leave my job right now for the course. I cannot continue my course right now, please allow me to freeze my course at this time because I want to continue this course after the busy schedule of my full-time job. I will continue my course because it is beneficial for my promotion and the organizational behavior course is very interesting.
Dear Mr.
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I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot
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continue
my part-time
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course
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because
I am doing my full-time job in the Human Resources department. Nowadays, we are hiring candidates in bulk positions and it is my task with the deadline and I cannot
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leave
my job right
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now
for the course.

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right
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now
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me to freeze my
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at this time
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I want to
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this
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after the busy schedule of my full-time job. I will
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continue
my
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course
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because
it is beneficial for my promotion and the organizational behavior
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is
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interesting.

IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
3 paragraphs
109 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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