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Letter for Apology for being late to pay back debt

Letter for Apology for being late to pay back debt XVo1q

Dear Mr JohnsanI am writing to apoligise for being too late to pay back your money which was given as a debt for me a two moths, I hope that You would accept my apologies after hearing of situation, which was forced me to be unreasonable to do promise on time. First of all, Let me explain that What did happened in my life which was cause to this mistake. Even though I have intended you to bring back your money $ 3000 unless I would get my salary, Unexpectedly some crucial problems occured in our family Which was belong to my child' s health so that It was impossible that I had to do my promise. If we did not take much more medicines him to get well from illness, It would be crucial influences which we could not imagine. Naturally, Not only we had no choice to think another thing, but also our family were due to extra credit from bank. Besides that I had get my 6 months wages from workplace for paying to recover all expenditures of the hospital where he was treated by doctors in advance. I beg you to forgive me for my like fault, It would be great respect for me, If you accept this excuse! Your faithfully Ann Parkinson

Dear Mr Possible spelling mistake found.Johnson
JohnsanI
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am
 writing to Possible spelling mistake found.apologizeapologiesapologist
apoligise
 for being too late to pay back your money which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 as a debt for me a two moths, I hope that You would accept my apologies after hearing of situation, which was forced
 me to be unreasonable to do promise on time. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 that What did The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "happen"happen
happened
 in my life which was cause to this mistake. Even though
 I have intended you to bring back your money The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: "$3000".$3000
$ 3000
 unless I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my salary, Unexpectedly
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some
 crucial problems Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "occurred", the past tense form of the verb 'occur'?occurred
occured
 in our family Which was Consider using a past participle here: "belonged".belonged
belong
 to my child' s health This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that It was impossible that I had to do my promise. If we did not take much more medicines him to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 well from illness, It would be crucial influences which we could not imagine. Naturally
, Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 we had no choice to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 another thing, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 our family were due to extra credit from bank. Besides
 that I had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "got", "gotten".gotgotten
get
 my 6 months wages from workplace for paying to recover all expenditures of the hospital where he was treated
 by doctors in advance. I beg you to forgive me for my like fault, It would be great respect for me, If you accept this excuse! Your faithfully
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