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You have bought eyeglasses from the online shop.They do not fit your eyesight.you want to change them.please write a complain letter to a manager of the online shop.

You have bought eyeglasses from the online shop. They do not fit your eyesight. you want to change them. please write a complain letter to a manager of the online shop. m2D11
Dear Sir or Madam, . I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding eyeglasses that I recently bought from your shop. They do not flexible to my seeing size. On the 5th of May we saw your advert on TV. After getting all information about item my husband recommended to me to buy your product. Then we made a call your company to order eyeglasses. I am grateful for your service. After three days we took our parcel. There are two. eyeglasses and one extra sunglasses in it. However, two glasses fit. Unfortunately, one of them must be changed. I am not satisfied with the item I have received. I expect another one. Yours faithfully, . Mary Smith.
Dear Sir or Madam
, .
I am writing in the hope of that you can
help
me with a problem regarding eyeglasses that I recently
bought
from your shop. They do not flexible to my seeing size. On the 5th of May we
saw
your advert on TV.
After
getting all information about item my husband recommended to me to
buy
your product. Then we made a call your
company
to order eyeglasses. I am grateful for your service.
After
three days we took our parcel. There are two.
eyeglasses
and one extra sunglasses in it.
However
, two glasses fit. Unfortunately, one of them
must
be
changed
. I am not satisfied with the item I have received. I
expect
another one. Yours
faithfully
, .
Mary Smith.
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IELTS letter You have bought eyeglasses from the online shop. They do not fit your eyesight. you want to change them. please write a complain letter to a manager of the online shop.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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