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your university is organising a tour to toronto city where your friend lives.write an email to him to 1) tell you about the tourists spots and2) arrange a weekend party for your classmates who are accompaning you

your university is organising a tour to toronto city where your friend lives. write an email to him to 1) tell you about the tourists spots and2) arrange a weekend party for your classmates who are accompaning you JLQ0e
Hi Mark, I hope you and your family are doing well. I apologize for not being in touch for a while due to my hectic schedule; however, we will be meeting soon as my university is arranging a trip from Wednesday, 30 June 2021 till Sunday. During this time, I want to explore every sought-after place in Toronto city. It would be great if you let me know about all the tourist places around so that I can plan my clothing accordingly and if anything extra is required, I will look for that as well. I have seen few videos regarding skydiving and river rafting in your town, we shall explore that too. Since my tour entails weekends, could you please arrange a weekend party for my friends who are coming along with me? Maybe we all can go for dinner at some hotel and try authentic local food. My classmates would love to have such experience though, especially Jack, who is a foodie! Can’t wait to meet you soon! Take care! Cheers, Nick
Hi Mark,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I apologize for not being in touch for a while due to my hectic schedule;
however
, we will be meeting
soon
as my university is arranging a trip from Wednesday, 30 June 2021 till Sunday.

During this time, I want to explore every sought-after place in Toronto city. It would be great if you
let
me know about all the tourist places around
so
that I can plan my clothing
accordingly
and if anything extra
is required
, I will look for that
as well
. I have
seen
few videos regarding skydiving and river rafting in your town, we shall explore that too.

Since my tour entails weekends, could you
please
arrange a weekend party for my friends who are coming along with me? Maybe we all can go for dinner at
some
hotel and try authentic local food. My classmates would
love
to have such experience though,
especially
Jack, who is a foodie!

Can’t wait to
meet
you
soon
! Take care!

Cheers,

Nick
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IELTS letter your university is organising a tour to toronto city where your friend lives. write an email to him to 1) tell you about the tourists spots and2) arrange a weekend party for your classmates who are accompaning you

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6.5
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