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If you exclude even one of the points given to you in the question prompt, you will get a lower grade. Answer all the points. In your letter: explain the problem describe why it disturbs you suggest a solution

If you exclude even one of the points given to you in the question prompt, you will get a lower grade. Answer all the points. In your letter: explain the problem describe why it disturbs you suggest a solution MoLqq
Dear John, Hope you are in the best of your health. As I am writing this letter to inform you, that I forgot my wallet in your home. I was very satisfied with my last holiday trip with you. I really enjoyed a lot. Hence, all went very well, I miss that scenic sunset view from California beach, and that road trip which we did was also amazing. I really thank you for such an amazing trip. Another thing which I want to inform, that I left my wallet in your home. I remember, I kept it in your almirah drawer, It was a black leather Gucci wallet. There is some cash and credit card in the wallet. However, I am in urgent need of my wallet. Because I have to pay some charges through credit card tomorrow. Accordingly, if it's possible for you then please send it by courier on an important basis or else, I will inform Rahul to take it from you and he will give it to me. Hence, Kindly do what suits you as soon as possible. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, JAGJIT
Dear John,

Hope you are in the best of your health. As I am writing this letter to inform you, that I forgot my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in your home.

I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
satisfied with my last holiday trip with you. I
really
enjoyed a lot.
Hence
, all went
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well, I miss that scenic sunset view from California beach, and that road trip which we did
This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
was
also
amazing. I
really
thank you for such an amazing trip. Another thing which I want to inform, that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in your home. I remember, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
it in your
Possible spelling mistake found.
almirah
drawer, It was a black leather Gucci
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
. There is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cash and credit card in the wallet.

However
, I am in urgent need of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I
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have to
pay
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some
charges through credit card tomorrow.
Accordingly
, if it's possible for you then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it by courier on an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
basis or else, I will inform Rahul to take it from you and he will give it to me.
Hence
, Kindly do what suits you as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
JAGJIT

IELTS letter If you exclude even one of the points given to you in the question prompt, you will get a lower grade. Answer all the points. In your letter: explain the problem describe why it disturbs you suggest a solution

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  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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