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write a complain letter to a manager that is unsatisfied service

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your washing agency. In fact, I expected a better service from an agency of your reputation but it was not what I waited. Firstly, I had called a servant to wash my children's winter clothes in my home at 10 o'clock, but if was 2 p. m before he came. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. Then, in spite of the fact that I had repeated my sentences about that to divide clothes into types and then to wash that the Wasserman had heard me correctly, he washed all my children's colorful clothes washed together. To make matters worse implanted all types of clothes over the others. I will not be calling your agency next time. However as manager you would be wise to guard agains such appealing treatment of your customers in future. I am looking forward to your reply and the resolution of this matter. I will wait to weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me at the above address or phone me on my mobile number at 554-3321. Yours faithfully, Rose Brown.

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your washing agency. In fact, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 a better service from an agency of your reputation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was not what I waited.

Firstly
, I had called a servant to wash my children's winter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
 in my home at 10 o'clock, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if was 2 p. m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 he came. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable.

Then, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 the fact that I had repeated my sentences about that to divide You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
 into types and then to wash that the Wasserman had heard me correctly
, he washed all my children's colorful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
 washed together. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 matters worse implanted all types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
 over the others. I will not be calling your agency next
 time.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 as manager you would be wise to guard Possible spelling mistake found.againstagaingainsa gains
agains
 such appealing treatment of your customers Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

I am looking forward to your reply and the resolution of this matter. I will wait to weeks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me at the above address or phone me on my mobile number at 554-3321.

Yours faithfully
,

Rose Brown. 