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Complain letter fot defective dyson hair styler

Complain letter fot defective dyson hair styler 9QGL3

Dear Sir, I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding Dyson hair styler that I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things started go wrong. On March 7th I visited one of your brand store which is located in Tashkent in order to buy a Dyson hair styler for myself. After getting enough information bout styler from your web site I decided to purchase it. In a week, I realized that there is something wrong with the item. When I used the styler for the first time it worked properly and my hair was twisted strongly. However, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been malfunction while it was working. My hair was still wet and curls did not hold at least an hour. Furthermore, when I tried using another same thing happened. In addition to this, the styler did not heat to necessary temperature. I would like you to replace the Dyson hair styler with well-functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, In Ho

Dear Sir,

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help
 me with a problem regarding Dyson You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwighairstylegrassfurhaircutfiber
hair
 styler that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two days, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
.

On March 7th I visited one of your brand store which is located
 in Tashkent in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a Dyson You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwighairstylegrassfurhaircutfiber
hair
 styler for myself. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 information bout styler from your Did you mean "website"?website
web site
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. In a week, I realized that there is something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 with the item. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the styler for the first
 time it worked properly
 and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwighairstylegrassfurhaircutfiber
hair
was twisted
strongly
. However
, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been malfunction while it was working. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwighairstylegrassfurhaircutfiber
hair
 was still
 wet and curls did not hold at least an hour.

Furthermore
, when I tried using another same thing happened. In addition
 to this, the styler did not heat to necessary temperature.

I would like you to replace the Dyson You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwighairstylegrassfurhaircutfiber
hair
 styler with well-functioning one. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately, I will be forced
 to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem.

I look forward to receiving a reply.

Yours faithfully
,

In Ho