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You have recently visited to a new restaurant. The waitress served you badly. Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant.

You have recently visited to a new restaurant. The waitress served you badly. Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Ep63r
I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during a visit to your restaurant which is named Shabboda, on July 4 the which was my songs birthday. Firstly, I had booked a table for my family members for 12: 00 but it was 12: 30 o'clock before we were seated. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. In spite of the fact that I had repeated our order to check that, the waitress had heard me correctly, but postponed for 20 minutes. Also she proceeded to bring us wrong starters. Such neglected service should not be tolerated in a restaurant which claims such excellent service staff. To make matters worse, the chocolate gateau we were served for dessert was handed on after an hour. The menu claimed though, that all deserts were freshly prepared but we waited waitress. Our family will not be celebrate birthday parties bin your restaurant again. However, as manager, you would be wise to guard against such appealing treatment of your customers in future. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this condition. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problemPlease contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile number
I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the
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service
I received during a visit to your restaurant which
is named
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Shabboda
, on July 4 the which was my songs birthday.
Firstly
, I had booked a table for my family members for 12: 00
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but
it was 12: 30 o'clock
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before
we
were seated
. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable.
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In spite of
the fact that I had repeated our order to
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check
that, the waitress had heard me
correctly
,
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but
postponed for 20 minutes.
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Also
she proceeded to bring us
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wrong
starters. Such neglected
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service
should not
be tolerated
in a restaurant which claims such excellent
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service
staff. To
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make
matters worse, the chocolate
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gateau
we
were served
for dessert
was handed
on after an hour. The menu claimed though, that all
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deserts
were
freshly
prepared
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but
we waited waitress. Our family will not be
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celebrate
birthday parties bin your restaurant again.
However
, as manager, you would be wise to guard against such appealing treatment of your customers
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this condition. I will wait two weeks
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before
turning to Customer
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Service
Association responsible for this
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problemPlease
contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile
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IELTS letter You have recently visited to a new restaurant. The waitress served you badly. Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
5.0
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