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You have recently visited to a new restaurant. The waitress served you badly. Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant.

You have recently visited to a new restaurant. The waitress served you badly. Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Ep63r

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during a visit to your restaurant which is named Shabboda, on July 4 the which was my songs birthday. Firstly, I had booked a table for my family members for 12: 00 but it was 12: 30 o'clock before we were seated. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. In spite of the fact that I had repeated our order to check that, the waitress had heard me correctly, but postponed for 20 minutes. Also she proceeded to bring us wrong starters. Such neglected service should not be tolerated in a restaurant which claims such excellent service staff. To make matters worse, the chocolate gateau we were served for dessert was handed on after an hour. The menu claimed though, that all deserts were freshly prepared but we waited waitress. Our family will not be celebrate birthday parties bin your restaurant again. However, as manager, you would be wise to guard against such appealing treatment of your customers in future. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this condition. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problemPlease contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile number

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but
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wrong
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service
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make
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deserts
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but
 we waited waitress. Our family will not be Consider using a past participle here: "celebrated".celebrated
celebrate
 birthday parties bin your restaurant again. However
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in future
. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this condition. I will wait two weeks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 turning to Customer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
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