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letter about a party to your neghbourg

letter about a party to your neghbourg EdOXM

Dear neighbours, I’m Alessia Marchi, I have just moved in and my flat is on the first floor. I’m writing this letter because I’ll organize a party on monday 22th in order to inaugurate my new place and I just want to introduce my plans for the party so that I could not bother you. Firstly, there will be only five or less friends of mine and I think it is important to know that, moslty for the family who lives downstairs. Secondly, I’m going to put on the music only until 21 P. M. because I don’t want that the noise won’t let your children sleep or maybe wake them up. I’ve already adviced my friend to don’t talk out loud. Last but not least, alchool is not allowed inside my house so that there won’t be drunk people inside the building and most important they can not annoy you. I think that I’ve explained everything about my party and if you want to enjoy us I will be glad to meet you and introduce you to my friends. All the best, Alessia

Dear Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
,

I’m Alessia Possible spelling mistake found.MarchMarciMar chiMarc hiMarch i
Marchi
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in and my flat is on the first
 floor.

I’m writing this letter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I’ll organize a party on Possible spelling mistake found.MondayMondays
monday
Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.21st22nd23rd
22th
 in order to inaugurate my new place and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to introduce my plans for the party This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I could not bother you.

Firstly
, there will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 five or Did you mean "fewer"? The noun friends is countable.fewer
less
 friends of mine and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to know that, Possible spelling mistake found.mostlyMosley
moslty
 for the family who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 downstairs.

Secondly
, I’m going to put on the music This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 until 21 P. M. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I don’t want that the noise won’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 your children sleep or maybe wake them up. I’ve already Possible spelling mistake found.adviceadvisedad vicedadv icedadvices
adviced
 my friend to don’t talk out loud.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, Possible spelling mistake found.alcohol
alchool
 is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 inside my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that there won’t be drunk
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 inside the building and most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 they can not annoy you.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 everything about my party and if you want to enjoy us I will be glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and introduce you to my friends.

All the best,

Alessia