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letter about a party to your neghbourg

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Dear neighbours, I’m Alessia Marchi, I have just moved in and my flat is on the first floor. I’m writing this letter because I’ll organize a party on monday 22th in order to inaugurate my new place and I just want to introduce my plans for the party so that I could not bother you. Firstly, there will be only five or less friends of mine and I think it is important to know that, moslty for the family who lives downstairs. Secondly, I’m going to put on the music only until 21 P. M. because I don’t want that the noise won’t let your children sleep or maybe wake them up. I’ve already adviced my friend to don’t talk out loud. Last but not least, alchool is not allowed inside my house so that there won’t be drunk people inside the building and most important they can not annoy you. I think that I’ve explained everything about my party and if you want to enjoy us I will be glad to meet you and introduce you to my friends. All the best, Alessia
Dear
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neighbours
,

I’m Alessia
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Marchi
, I have
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just
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moved
in and my flat is on the
first
floor.

I’m writing this letter
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because
I’ll organize a party on
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monday
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22th
in order to inaugurate my new place and I
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just
want to introduce my plans for the party
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so
that I could not bother you.

Firstly
, there will be
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only
five or
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less
friends of mine and I
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think
it is
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important
to know that,
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moslty
for the family who
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lives
downstairs.

Secondly
, I’m going to put on the music
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only
until 21 P. M.
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because
I don’t want that the noise won’t
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let
your children sleep or maybe wake them up. I’ve already
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adviced
my friend to don’t talk out loud.

Last
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but
not least,
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alchool
is not
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allowed
inside my
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house
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so
that there won’t
be drunk
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people
inside the building and most
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important
they can not annoy you.

I
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think
that I’ve
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explained
everything about my party and if you want to enjoy us I will be glad to
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meet
you and introduce you to my friends.

All the best,

Alessia
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IELTS letter letter about a party to your neghbourg

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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