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Dear Jim, I received your e-mail about the Book of the month. I would like to recommend all staff members to read “The magic of the math” as the nomination work. The main message of this story is understanding the reality which you don’t want to face. The main character is just a little boy though, he tries many things that he isn’t willing to through having various experiences. We will realize how important small things are and we should take action and keep doing something until we get the result. I believe that it’s worth reading and hope this will help. Best regards, Kay

Dear Jim,

I received your e-mail about the Book of the month.

I would like to recommend all staff members to read “The magic of the math” as the nomination work.

The main message of this story The verb 'understanding' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is understanding
 the reality which you don’t want to face.

The main character is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 boy though, he tries This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things that he isn’t willing to through having various experiences.

We will realize how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 things Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).are, and
are and
 we should take action and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 doing something until we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the result.

I believe that Did you mean "its worth reading"?its worth reading
it’s worth reading
 and hope this will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

Best regards,

Kay