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Book of the month you wish to nominate

Book of the month you wish to nominate 2aLNb
Dear Jim, I received your e-mail about the Book of the month. I would like to recommend all staff members to read “The magic of the math” as the nomination work. The main message of this story is understanding the reality which you don’t want to face. The main character is just a little boy though, he tries many things that he isn’t willing to through having various experiences. We will realize how important small things are and we should take action and keep doing something until we get the result. I believe that it’s worth reading and hope this will help. Best regards, Kay
Dear Jim,

I received your e-mail about the Book of the month.

I would like to recommend all staff members to read “The magic of the math” as the nomination work.

The main message of this story
is understanding
the reality which you don’t want to face.

The main character is
just
a
little
boy though, he tries
many
things that he isn’t willing to through having various experiences.

We will realize how
important
small
things
are and
we should take action and
keep
doing something until we
get
the result.

I believe that
it’s worth reading
and hope this will
help
.

Best regards,

Kay
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IELTS letter Book of the month you wish to nominate

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  American English
9 paragraphs
104 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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