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You are bad served at the restaurant. You should write about complaint letter

You are bad served at the restaurant. You should write about complaint letter eAmLG
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service received when we had gone to dine at your restaurant on 7th of July 2021. I would like to make a complaint against the bad service received I had gone to dine at restaurant with my daughter on the occasion of her birthday. After getting a table we had to wait for fifteen minutes for the waiter to come and take order. Above that he seemed hesitant to take our order. We had to wait for half an hour after placing order. The food was cold when it was served and when we told the waiter about it he refused to ace the order again. We also found him to be very politely. We have been dining at your restaurant since years but have never received such a bad service. I request you to look into matter and take some action against the waiter or else you would lose some of your loyal customers. Kind regards Graig David
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service received when we had gone to dine at your restaurant on 7th of July 2021. I would like to
make
a complaint against the
bad
service received I had gone to dine at restaurant with my daughter on the occasion of her birthday. After getting a table we had to wait for fifteen minutes for the waiter to
come
and take
order
. Above that he seemed hesitant to take our
order
. We had to wait for half an hour after placing
order
. The food was
cold
when it
was served
and when we
told
the waiter about
it
he refused to ace the
order
again. We
also
found him to be
very
politely
. We have been dining at your restaurant since years
but
have never received such a
bad
service. I request you to look into matter and take
some
action against the waiter or else you would lose
some
of your loyal customers. Kind regards
Graig
David
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IELTS letter You are bad served at the restaurant. You should write about complaint letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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