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let introduce yourself and your decision of major

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Hello, my name is Thu but my friends all call me Trump, it is a cute nickname. I grew up in a family of three and I am the only child. I am from Vietnam and I spent my childhood in a hectic city - Ho Chi Minh city. One thing you might not know about me is that I am a sneakerholic. I will spend the whole day searching model, version of sneaker, especial Adidas and Nike's brand. Now I am preparing to become a university student. I am so excited about that. And I decided to study in Supply chain. It's may be an interesting major. Thanks for listening me.
Hello, my name is Thu
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but
my friends all call me Trump, it is a cute nickname. I grew up in a family of
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three and
I am the
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only
child. I am from Vietnam and I spent my childhood in a hectic city
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-
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Ho Chi Minh city
. One thing you might not know about me is that I am a
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sneakerholic
. I will spend the whole day searching model, version of sneaker, especial Adidas and Nike's brand.
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Now
I am preparing to become a university student. I am
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so
excited about that. And I decided to study in Supply chain. It's may be an interesting major. Thanks for listening me.
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IELTS letter let introduce yourself and your decision of major

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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