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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were write 150 words

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were write 150 words a0X9

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to you regarding some lost hand luggage on last Wednesdays' evening flight from London to Vancouver. I had boarded flight Z075 from London with ticket number AZ081 to Vancouver on the 3rd of March 2021. I was returning home from a short visit to friends in London and had three pieces of luggage with me, i. e. a black suitcase, a backpack, and a handbag. Upon arriving home the following morning, I noticed that I only had two of the three bags with me. I seem to have left the backpack on the flight when disembarking from the plane. The missing backpack is quite unique. It's a leopard print child-sized leather bag with a golden zipper. The bag also has a leopard embossed face on the outer pocket. The contents of the bag include some knick-knacks from my trip. Although not overly important, they do have sentimental value and I would love to have them back. I would appreciate it if the bag could be returned to me. Yours faithfully, Tami White

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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some
 lost hand luggage on last Wednesdays' evening flight from London to Vancouver.

I had boarded flight Z075 from London with ticket number AZ081 to Vancouver on the 3rd of March 2021. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was returning home from a short visit to friends in London and had three pieces of luggage with me, There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
 a black suitcase, a backpack, and a handbag. Upon arriving home the following morning, I noticed that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 had two of the three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bags
 with me. I seem to have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the backpack on the flight when disembarking from the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
.

The missing backpack is quite unique. It's a leopard print child-sized leather You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 with a golden zipper. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
also
 has a leopard embossed face on the outer pocket. The contents of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 include This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 knick-knacks from my trip. Although not overly
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important
, they do have sentimental value and I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to have them back.

I would appreciate it if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 could be returned
 to me.

Yours faithfully
,

Tami White