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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were write 150 words

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were write 150 words a0X9
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to you regarding some lost hand luggage on last Wednesdays' evening flight from London to Vancouver. I had boarded flight Z075 from London with ticket number AZ081 to Vancouver on the 3rd of March 2021. I was returning home from a short visit to friends in London and had three pieces of luggage with me, i. e. a black suitcase, a backpack, and a handbag. Upon arriving home the following morning, I noticed that I only had two of the three bags with me. I seem to have left the backpack on the flight when disembarking from the plane. The missing backpack is quite unique. It's a leopard print child-sized leather bag with a golden zipper. The bag also has a leopard embossed face on the outer pocket. The contents of the bag include some knick-knacks from my trip. Although not overly important, they do have sentimental value and I would love to have them back. I would appreciate it if the bag could be returned to me. Yours faithfully, Tami White
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to you regarding
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some
lost hand luggage on last Wednesdays' evening flight from London to Vancouver.

I had boarded flight Z075 from London with ticket number AZ081 to Vancouver on the 3rd of March 2021.
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I
was returning home from a short visit to friends in London and had three pieces of luggage with me,
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i. e.
a black suitcase, a backpack, and a handbag. Upon arriving home the following morning, I noticed that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
had two of the three
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bags
with me. I seem to have
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left
the backpack on the flight when disembarking from the
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plane
.

The missing backpack is quite unique. It's a leopard print child-sized leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
with a golden zipper. The
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bag
also
has a leopard embossed face on the outer pocket. The contents of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
include
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
knick-knacks from my trip. Although not
overly
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important
, they do have sentimental value and I would
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love
to have them back.

I would appreciate it if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
could
be returned
to me.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tami White

IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were write 150 words

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