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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you P3Bp
Dear Charuka, I hope you are doing good. Thank you so much for sending the photos, they are lovely. The quality is great, I will surely get them framed for my drawing room wall. Your letter refreshed my memory with the amazing holidays we had last year in India. You are a wonderful host and I will be always grateful to you for allowing me to stay at your place and making me feel like home. I know you must be thinking why I didn't write you a letter before. After our holidays, I got assigned to a new project which required a lot of time and attention. I am caught up with that from last few months and finally its about to get over next month. After some time, winter holidays are coming. I am inviting you this time to come to Canada and stay with me. I will be more than happy to have you here and will plan short trips also. I urge you to book your ticket as soon as possible. I would love to hear from you soon with the planned dates you will be visiting. Yours lovinglyAstha Goel
Dear
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Charuka
,

I hope you are doing
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good
. Thank you
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so
much for sending the photos, they are lovely. The quality is great, I will
surely
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get
them framed for my drawing room wall. Your letter refreshed my memory with the amazing holidays we had last year in India. You are a wonderful host and I will be always grateful to you for allowing me to stay at your place and making me feel like home.

I know you
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must
be thinking why I didn't write you a letter
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before
. After our holidays, I
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got
assigned to a new project which required
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a lot of
time and attention. I
am caught
up with that from last few months and
finally
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its
about to
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get
over
next
month.

After
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some
time, winter holidays are coming. I am inviting you this time to
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come
to Canada and stay with me. I will be more than happy to have you here and will plan short trips
also
.
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I
urge you to book your ticket as
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soon
as possible.

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I
would
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love
to hear from you
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soon
with the planned dates you will be visiting.

Yours
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lovinglyAstha
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Goel

IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
6 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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