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Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend .they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend. they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you MAG9
Dear John and Jane I hope this letter finds you well. I'm just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you send. The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were fantastic host, and I couldn't have asked for better guides to show me around. Sorry I didn't write to you earlier, but I 've been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was! Any way, I'm back to normal now and I've handed in all of my assignments. In fact, now that I'm free, why don't you both come and stay? There's a spare room here, so you're welcome to use it whenever you like. Hope to see you soon. Peter
Dear John and Jane I hope this letter finds you well. I'm
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writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you
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. The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You
really
were fantastic host, and I couldn't have
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better guides to
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me around. Sorry I didn't write to you earlier,
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I 've been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I
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told
you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I
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thought
it was! Any way, I'm back to normal
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now
and I've handed in all of my assignments. In fact,
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now
that I'm free, why don't you both
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come
and stay? There's a spare room here,
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you're welcome to
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it whenever you like. Hope to
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. Peter
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend. they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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