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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come YA15
Daer Neighbour, Hope everything is fine at your end. Myself, . Ankita, your neighbour for Flat 202. We have shifted today itself. This the is the first time we bought a house, all these years we were staying in a rented apartment, so you can understand how good we must be feeling. And i want to celebrate this happiness with all of my family member and ofcourse my new neighbours. I am planning to organise a House Warming party on 5th of March 2021. As there will be a DJ too it will be a bit noisy from 1pm to 5pm. I know this part of the day is usually quite hours as most of them must be resting, childrens must be studying and it will be a disturbance for all of them. I would like to request you to bare it with us just for 4 hours. Music will eb played between 2 pm to 4 pm as, from1 pm there will be food served to all the guests and it will be unti 2 pm and then DJ will play the songs. So loud music can be heard between 2 pm to 4 pm (2 hours only). Looking forward to see you all at the party. Please join us and make this lifetime event a memorable one for me. With best Regards Ankita
Daer
Neighbour
,

Hope everything is fine at your
end
. Myself
, .
Ankita, your
neighbour
for Flat 202. We have shifted
today
itself. This
the
is the
first
time we
bought
a
house
, all these years we were staying in a rented apartment,
so
you can understand how
good
we
must
be feeling. And
i
want to celebrate this happiness with all of my family member and
ofcourse
my new
neighbours
.

I am planning to
organise
a
House
Warming party on 5th of March 2021.
As
there will be a DJ too it will be a bit noisy from 1pm to 5pm. I know this part of the day is
usually
quite hours as most of them
must
be resting,
childrens
must
be studying and it will be a disturbance for all of them. I would like to request you to bare it with us
just
for 4 hours. Music will
eb
played between 2 pm to 4 pm as, from1 pm there will be food served to all the guests and it will be
unti
2 pm and then DJ will play the songs.
So
loud music can
be heard
between 2 pm to 4 pm (2 hours
only
).

Looking forward to
see
you all at the party.
Please
join
us and
make
this lifetime
event
a memorable one for me.

With best Regards

Ankita
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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