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Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship 3gwgY
This letter is to reveal my strong interest and motivation to attend the programme of the European Master in Building Information Modelling. I am a final year student in the Civil Engineering Department at Andalas University and will graduate on February 2021. To date, I have been trusted by the Civil Engineering Department to become a lecturer assistant after going through a reasonably strict selection under the Institution of the Building Technology and Modelling Laboratory. I was trained to learn more in civil science than my peers, especially in the field of modelling. I was also allowed to teach new students about the basic of engineering drawings and software incivil engineering. The subjects that I teach are technical drawings and Autocad software that relate to one of the courses in my major. Outside courses, my team and I also conducted software training leading to BIM for the public. Software that I have successfully taught to the general public is Sketchup and Lumion. In my campus, skills in using civil engineering software especially modelling are still scarce, and I even had the opportunity to teach and become a tutor for civil engineering master program students in the use of modelling software. As time went on, my lecturer introduced BIM to the teaching assistant team and me. My teacher asked me to study the Tekla Structure and Revit. It is the programme which I got interested in BIM, and I started to find out more related to this programme. Once in two months, I was required to study and create assignments using BIM software, then the results would be presented and taught again with the assistant team. To hone my knowledge and soft skills more about BIM, I started attending training and seminars on BIM both online and offline. Currently, I have a BIM certification, namely the Allplan software held by PT WIKA. Apart from the BIM Certification, I have also been certified in the building experts, K3/ Occupational Health and Safety (OHS), and Construction Management. Moreover, I also participated in the CAD competition and occupied the 6th position at the Provincial level. From my description, I hope to get the opportunity to continue my masters in BIM programme. My country and especially my campus, are still lack of experts in this field because the BIM is still relatively new in Indonesia my campus environment, while other countries have gone a long way to using BIM. Coupled with a plan from my department to add one compulsory subject, namely BIM. Besides that, studying in Europe was my dream from a young age, coupled with the existence of a BIM major which is my favourite science. After I graduate, I plan to become a lecturer who will teach knowledge about BIM to Indonesian students who are still unfamiliar with BIM technology. It does not rule out the possibility to teach at my campus, considering there are plans to add BIM courses to my department and my lecturer in modelling will retire in 2023. Apart from that, I also want to channel my knowledge in the field of government and will apply BIM on the project. I like to teach, let alone teach the science that interests me the most. My main goal and dream are to introduce, teach, and apply BIM technology in my country, Indonesia, which is still unfamiliar with BIM. Thank you for your consideration of my application, and I look forward to your acceptance. Sincerely, Nurul Adha
This letter is to reveal my strong interest and motivation to attend the
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programme
of the European Master in Building Information Modelling.

I am a final year
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student
in the
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Civil
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Engineering
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Department
at
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Andalas
University and will graduate on February 2021. To date, I have
been trusted
by the
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Civil
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Engineering
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Department
to become a
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lecturer
assistant after going through a
reasonably
strict selection under the Institution of the Building Technology and
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Modelling
Laboratory. I
was trained
to learn more in
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civil
science than my peers,
especially
in the field of
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modelling
. I was
also
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allowed
to
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teach
new
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students
about the basic of
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engineering
drawings and
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software
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incivil
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engineering
. The subjects that I
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teach
are technical drawings and
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Autocad
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software
that relate to one of the courses in my major. Outside courses, my team and I
also
conducted
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software
training leading to BIM for the public.
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Software
that I have
successfully
taught to the
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general public
is
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Sketchup
and
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Lumion
. In my
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campus
,
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skills
in using
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civil
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engineering
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software
especially
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modelling
are
still
scarce, and I even had the opportunity to
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teach
and become a tutor for
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civil
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engineering
master program
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students
in the
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use
of
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modelling
software.

As time went on, my
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lecturer
introduced BIM to the teaching assistant team and me. My teacher asked me to study the
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Tekla
Structure and
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Revit
. It is the
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programme
which I
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got
interested in BIM, and I
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started
to find out more related to this
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programme
. Once in two months, I
was required
to study and create assignments using BIM
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software
, then the results would
be presented
and taught again with the assistant team. To hone my knowledge and soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
more about BIM, I
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started
attending training and seminars on BIM both online and offline.
Currently
, I have a BIM certification,
namely
the
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Allplan
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software
held by PT
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WIKA
. Apart from the BIM Certification, I have
also
been certified
in the building experts, K3/ Occupational Health and Safety (OHS), and Construction Management.
Moreover
, I
also
participated in the CAD competition and occupied the 6th position at the Provincial level.

From my description, I hope to
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get
the opportunity to continue my masters in BIM
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programme
. My country and
especially
my
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campus
, are
still
lack of experts in this field
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because
the BIM is
still
relatively
new in Indonesia my
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campus
environment, while other countries have gone a long way to using BIM. Coupled with a plan from my
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department
to
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add
one compulsory subject,
namely
BIM.
Besides
that, studying in Europe was my dream from a young age, coupled with the existence of a BIM major which is my
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favourite
science.

After I graduate, I plan to become a
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lecturer
who will
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teach
knowledge about BIM to Indonesian
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students
who are
still
unfamiliar with BIM technology. It does not
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rule
out the possibility to
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teach
at my
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campus
, considering there are plans to
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add
BIM courses to my
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department
and my
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lecturer
in
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modelling
will retire in 2023. Apart from that, I
also
want to channel my knowledge in the field of
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government
and will apply BIM on the project. I like to
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teach
,
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let
alone
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teach
the science that interests me the most. My main goal and dream are to introduce,
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teach
, and apply BIM technology in my country, Indonesia, which is
still
unfamiliar with BIM.

Thank you for your consideration of my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely
,

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Nurul
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Adha
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
576 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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