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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a regular customer of your grocery store 'The Daily Store' and I'm writing this letter to bring into your notice that I got an injury during my last visit, and would request you to take some actions on the same. I visit your store almost everyday to buy both household and food items. While I was browsing through the food section, some of your employees were loading things onto the shelves. During that, they moved the whole rack, due to which a big box fell on my head. Even though they did not do it intentionally, I got hurt. This is not the first instance, sometimes, a few items are just lying on the floor in the way where people walk. These small things really affect the customers mindset. On that note, I would like you to take some action. First of all, customers should be given first preference and during rush hours, staff should help customers rather than doing their own work. They should be more careful when someone is walking nearby them. I hope my suggestions would help you improve store conditions and bring you more success. Yours sincerely, Rishabh Handa

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a regular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 of your grocery store 'The Daily Store' and I'm writing this letter to bring into your notice that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an injury during my last visit, and would request you to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 actions on the same. I visit your store almost ‘Everyday’ is an adjective. Did you mean “every day”?every day
everyday
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 both household and food items.

While I was browsing through the food section, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of your employees were loading things onto the shelves. During that, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 the whole rack, due to which a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 box fell on my head. Even though
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, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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sometimes
, a few items are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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people
 walk. These This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 things really
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customers
 mindset.

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some
 action. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
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given
first
 preference and during rush hours, staff should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
rather
 than doing their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 work. They should be more careful when someone is walking nearby them.

I hope my suggestions would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 store conditions and bring you more success.

Yours sincerely
,

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