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Job notification for full time baby sitter

Job notification for full time baby sitter JW6B

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings to you! I am writing in regards to your ad in ‘Aussies do well’ for a requirement of someone to look after your child and live with the family for next six month. I gladly offer my services for the same, knowing it is a task of responsibility and trust below is the explanation why I feel I can be suitable for this job. I was excited to look at this as it is exactly something I am looking for, I love to be around kids and being new to the city living with family might help me settle in well. Most importantly, I have worked as a full time teacher for primary school for 5 years and am well versed with the kids of this age group plus being a tutor, I can help your kid with learning as well. I am preparing for an exam which is due in 8 months, so it is perfect for me to look after your kid and also take care of the baby, since I won't require to step out I can give a lot of time to the child. I am excited already to know you all well, if you feel I am suitable for this role, I will be glad to take this discussion forward. I am attaching my resume which has details of work and my contact. Yours Sincerely

Dear Sir or Madam,

Greetings to you!

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 your ad in ‘Aussies do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
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live
 with the family for next
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so
 it is perfect for me to look after your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
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 time to the child.

I am excited
 already to know you all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
, if you feel I am suitable for this role, I will be glad to take this discussion forward.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am attaching my resume which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of work and my contact.

Yours Sincerely