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Job application letter to the company

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Dear Mr ParkerI am writing to apply for a job of project manager in your company which was advertised in local site. I am 25 years old and obtained a degree in business management in 2018. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am well experienced and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. Moreover, I participate in leadership course. I am very hardworking and eager to challenges. In addition to this since my enthusiasm and knowledge I can control any situation without troubles. If you would like me to attend an interview I would be very grateful. Iam looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Sara Johns.

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