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Job application letter to the company

Job application letter to the company doVrE
Dear Mr ParkerI am writing to apply for a job of project manager in your company which was advertised in local site. I am 25 years old and obtained a degree in business management in 2018. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am well experienced and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. Moreover, I participate in leadership course. I am very hardworking and eager to challenges. In addition to this since my enthusiasm and knowledge I can control any situation without troubles. If you would like me to attend an interview I would be very grateful. Iam looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Sara Johns.
Dear Mr
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ParkerI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing to apply for a job of project manager in your
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company
which
was advertised
in local site. I am 25 years
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old
and obtained a degree in business management in 2018. I feel I have
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many
of the
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important
qualifications needed for this job.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am well experienced and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and experience.
Moreover
, I participate in leadership course. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
hardworking and eager to
With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: "challenge".
challenges
.
In addition
to this since my enthusiasm and knowledge I can control any situation without troubles.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you
Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)
would like
me to attend an interview I would be
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very
grateful.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Iam
looking forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
Sara Johns.

IELTS letter Job application letter to the company

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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