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Job application. Alarge company needs a project manager for a project. choose one of these jobs and write a letter of application. Include any relevant educational backround and practical experiences you have in your cover letter.

Job application. Alarge company needs a project manager for a project. choose one of these jobs and write a letter of application. Include any relevant educational backround and practical experiences you have in your cover letter. WmJNq
Dear Sir ClintonI am writing to apply for a job of a prpoject manager at your company. Which I saw advertised in your telegram chanell. I am thirty six years old and obtained a degree at foreign language faculty after named Nizami Pedogogical University. I have practices in business managment and i have over ten years experience working in this field. In addition to this i participate to develope menegment course and obtained a degree C 1. i would particularly like to join your company. I am sociable I can get on well with new people. I believe that my academic qualifications and international experiences would be of benefit your company. I do want to be a member of your company. I look forward to meeting or talking with you soon. Should you be intrested in my qualifications and experience, please do not hesitate to contact me at 93 384 5769 79. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nargiza Duvlonova
Dear Sir
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writing to apply for a job of a
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prpoject
manager at your
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and obtained a degree at foreign language faculty after named
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Nizami
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Pedogogical
University. I have practices in business
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managment
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have over ten years experience working in this field.
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to this
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participate to
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develope
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menegment
course and obtained a degree C 1.
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would
particularly
like to
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join
your
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company
. I am sociable I can
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get
on well with new
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people
. I believe that my academic qualifications and international experiences would be of benefit your
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company
.
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I
do want to be a member of your
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company
.
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I
look forward to meeting or talking with you
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soon
. Should you be
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intrested
in my qualifications and experience,
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please
do not hesitate to contact me at 93 384 5769 79. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
,
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Nargiza
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Duvlonova
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IELTS letter Job application. Alarge company needs a project manager for a project. choose one of these jobs and write a letter of application. Include any relevant educational backround and practical experiences you have in your cover letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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