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application letter. Finding a new position in summer vacation.

application letter. Finding a new position in summer vacation. k69Q2
APPLICATION IETTER DEAR SIR OR MADAM, I am writing to apply for a job of a tutor at your school camp which I saw advertised in our telegram group. I am thirty years old and obtained a degree of an English teacher in Andijan state Institute of languages. I feel I have man of the important qualifications for this job. Iam presently working as an English teacher in the department of secondary school 1, where I have been for eight years. In addition to this, I participate in CFFR and IELTS course. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several indoor and outdoor activities such as reading books, planting flowers. I am sociable and I am get on well with new people easily. Ilike children. My lessons will be absolutely interesting. My pupils achieve great successes. I am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Yours faithfully Lola Anvarova.
APPLICATION
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IETTER


DEAR SIR OR MADAM,

I am writing to apply for a job of a tutor at your school camp which I
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saw
advertised in our telegram group.

I am thirty years
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old
and obtained a degree of an English teacher in
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Andijan
state Institute of languages.
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I
feel I have
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man
of the
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important
qualifications for this job.
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Iam
presently
working as an English teacher in the department of secondary school 1, where I have been for eight years.
In addition
to this, I participate in
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CFFR
and IELTS course. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
. I am
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
and experience.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
enjoy several indoor and outdoor activities such as reading books, planting flowers.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
sociable and
I am
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
.
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Ilike
children. My lessons will be
absolutely
interesting. My pupils achieve great successes.

I am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job.

I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position.

Yours
faithfully


Lola
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Anvarova
.
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IELTS letter application letter. Finding a new position in summer vacation.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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