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Dear friend.Thank you for letter l am very well.

Dear friend. Thank you for letter l am very well. VlpO7
It is great to hear from you and l hope you and your family are very well. l'm do happy for writing to me and l will trying answers your questions. l remembered to you l'm fine but l've got a very busy week ahead. l'm a memberof thr school team and use are preparing for an important match the city championship and l will try. Also l enjoy all kind of sports with especilly running like to me, there for everyday in the morning l run in the over street or stadion it is very important my body that is health. However, when l have got free time l will try for watching Football TV but l am no fond of playing football such as, in the morning after running of course l play football.
It is great to hear from you and l hope you and your family are
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well.
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'm do happy for writing to me and l will
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trying
answers your questions.
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l
remembered to you l'm fine
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l've
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busy week ahead.
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'm a
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memberof
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school team and
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use
are preparing for an
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match the city championship and l will try.
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Also
l enjoy all kind of sports with
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especilly
running like to me, there for
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everyday
in the morning l run in the over street or
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stadion
it is
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very
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important
my body
that is
health.
However
, when l have
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got
free time l will try for watching Football TV
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but
l am no fond of playing football such as, in the morning after running
of course
l play football.
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IELTS letter Dear friend. Thank you for letter l am very well.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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