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I've got one close friend who I spend a lot of time with. What about you ? Tell me about your friends. How important are they to you ?

I've got one close friend who I spend a lot of time with. What about you? Tell me about your friends. How important are they to you? 0p3d3
Hi Anna, Thanks for your letter. It's delighted to hear from you. I'm really satisfied to know you have a best friend. Well, you asked me about my friends in your letter. I have many buddies, who study in the same class as me. We have a lot of interests in common. So, we often make a plan to study and play badminton or have a coffee together. But, I don't have a best friend. I have a similar nice friendship with all of my friends. Talking about my friends, they play an important role in my heart. Whenever I'm ups and downs, they always help me to get over. Additionally, they also give me so much meaningful advice. I feel my life is wonderful because of having them. Write me soon and don't forget to tell me about what you often do with your best friend! Love Nghi
Hi Anna, Thanks for your letter. It's delighted to hear from you. I'm
really
satisfied to know you have
Use "the" with the superlative.
a
best
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friend
. Well, you asked me about my
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friends
in your letter. I have
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many
buddies, who study in the same
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class
as me. We have
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a lot of
interests in common.
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, we
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often
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make
a plan to study and play badminton or have a coffee together.
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But
, I don't have
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a
best
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friend
. I have a similar nice friendship with all of my
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friends
. Talking about my
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friends
, they play an
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important
role in my heart. Whenever I'm ups and downs, they always
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help
me to
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get
over.
Additionally
, they
also
give me
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so
much meaningful advice. I feel my life is wonderful
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because
of having them. Write me
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soon
and don't forget to
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tell
me about what you
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often
do with your best
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friend
!
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Love
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Nghi

IELTS letter I've got one close friend who I spend a lot of time with. What about you? Tell me about your friends. How important are they to you?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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