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I've got one close friend who I spend a lot of time with. What about you ? Tell me about your friends. How important are they to you ?

I've got one close friend who I spend a lot of time with. What about you? Tell me about your friends. How important are they to you? 0p3d3

Hi Anna, Thanks for your letter. It's delighted to hear from you. I'm really satisfied to know you have a best friend. Well, you asked me about my friends in your letter. I have many buddies, who study in the same class as me. We have a lot of interests in common. So, we often make a plan to study and play badminton or have a coffee together. But, I don't have a best friend. I have a similar nice friendship with all of my friends. Talking about my friends, they play an important role in my heart. Whenever I'm ups and downs, they always help me to get over. Additionally, they also give me so much meaningful advice. I feel my life is wonderful because of having them. Write me soon and don't forget to tell me about what you often do with your best friend! Love Nghi

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