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Dear Mrs. Sarah I am writing to assist to my daughter’s school trip to Moscow. I am Jasmine’s mother and I have heard that you are looking for parents who can help during the trip. Indeed, I had taken a few days off from work and I wanted to spend time with my daughter and her classmates. It would be a great to be there for a few days. The things I can help during the trip are that I will able to guide in city of Moscow since I have been to there couple of times and I will able to do Russian to English and vice versa translation when someone need help. There are couples of questions I may need to know. I would appreciate if you could tell me that if I am expected to provide my accommodation or it will be arranged for the parents. Please, do not hesitate to give a call if you need to discuss this matter further. Yours sincerely, Full name
Dear Mrs. Sarah

I am writing to assist to my daughter’s school trip to Moscow. I am Jasmine’s mother and I have heard that you are looking for parents who can
help
during the trip.

Indeed
, I had taken a few days off from work and I wanted to spend time with my daughter and her classmates. It would be a great to be there for a few days.

The things I can
help
during the trip are that I
will able
to guide in city of Moscow since I have been to
there
couple of
times and I
will able
to do Russian to English and vice versa translation when someone need
help
.

There are couples of questions I may need to know. I would appreciate if you could
tell
me that if I am
expected
to provide my accommodation or it will
be arranged
for the parents.

Please
, do not hesitate to give a call if you need to discuss this matter
further
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Full name
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7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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