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Invite your friend to birthday party of new born baby.

Invite your friend to birthday party of new born baby. m89VL
Hi Ryana. It's been ages since we last spoke. Sorry for not writing for a long time. How's the life treating you? Any news? I really appreciate your letter in which you have written about your visit to our school. But on that time I've been on my materny leave. So I couldn't see you. I've got some news. To begin with, I gave a birth to a wonderful daughter and named her after your name, Ryana. I'm so happy for this. So, we are planning to have a birthday party on the 3rd of December. Have you any plans for this day? I'd live you to come to the party. I feel you won't miss an opportunity having time with us. As well as we changed our address, let me to inform you. It's in Berlin street, 17. You can get there by bus number 3. Well that's all for now. Hope you to come. Love, Catherine.
Hi
Ryana
. It's been ages since we last spoke. Sorry for not writing for a long time. How's the life treating you? Any news?

I
really
appreciate your letter in which you have written about your visit to our school.
But
on that time I've been on my
materny
leave
.
So
I couldn't
see
you.

I've
got
some
news. To
begin
with, I gave a birth to a wonderful daughter and named her after your name,
Ryana
. I'm
so
happy for this.
So
, we are planning to have a birthday party on the 3rd of December. Have you any plans for this day? I'd
live
you to
come
to the party. I feel you won't miss an opportunity having time with us.
As well
as we
changed
our address,
let
me to inform you. It's in Berlin street, 17. You can
get
there by bus number 3. Well that's all for
now
. Hope you to
come
.
Love
, Catherine.
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IELTS letter Invite your friend to birthday party of new born baby.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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