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you are going to spend a weekend with your friend from Scotland

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Hi Chris, Thanks for your email. I’m very happy to hear from you. On Friday, I’d love to see your friend’s band. What kind of music do they play? I think they’ll play lively music before it started and I hope I can meet them. I’d want to participate in both activities on Saturday. The boat trip sounds great, it can help my body relax. About the football match, I’ll pay great attention to skills and moves to score goals. Because I enjoy football and want to improve my skills. Well, If you want to improve your Italian quickly, you should look for websites related to the language or you may study by watching Italian TV shows, listening to music. Oh! Okay. I’m going to Scotland with my new skateboard. You will love it for sure and you can try it. I look forward to hearing from you. Love, Khoa
Hi Chris,

Thanks for your email. I’m
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very
happy to hear from you.

On Friday, I’d
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love
to
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see
your friend’s band. What kind of music do they play? I
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think
they’ll play lively music
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before
it
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started
and I hope I can
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meet
them.

I’d want to participate in both activities on Saturday. The boat trip sounds great, it can
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help
my body relax. About the football match, I’ll pay great attention to
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skills
and
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moves
to score goals.
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Because
I enjoy football and want to
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improve
my
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skills
.

Well, If you want to
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improve
your Italian
quickly
, you should look for websites related to the language or you may study by watching Italian TV
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shows
, listening to music.

Oh! Okay. I’m going to Scotland with my new skateboard. You will
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love
it for sure and you can try it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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,

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Khoa
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IELTS letter you are going to spend a weekend with your friend from Scotland

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  American English
9 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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