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A FRIEND HAS AGREED TO LOOK YOUR CAT WHILE YOU ARE AWAY FOR A WEEK ON BUSINESS

A FRIEND HAS AGREED TO LOOK YOUR CAT WHILE YOU ARE AWAY FOR A WEEK ON BUSINESS R0VdY
I WRITE A LETTER FOR YOU, BECAUSE I HAD BUSINESS FOR A WEEK. SUDDENLY, I AM GOING OUTSIDE IN MY HOUSE. I WILL GO TO THE BATANGAS TO HANLDE MY BUSINESS. I WILL STAY AT HOTEL DE LUNA, NASUGBU BATANGAS WITH ROOM NO. 301 AND THEIR PHONE NO. IS 0917312181. YOU CAN CONTACT ME THIS PHONE NO. WHILE ON MY BUSINESS TRIP IN BATANGAS. CAN YOU TAKE CARE OF MY CAT SISI, BECAUSE THEY CAN NOT GOING WITH ME. HERE SOME INSTRUCTIONS HOW TO HANDLE MY CAT. THE FOODS AND VITAMINS IS ON THE UPPER CABINET IN THEIR CAGE, THERES ONE CABINET ONLY. FEED THEIR MORNING LUNCH AND EVENING, GIVE HER WATER WHEN YOU FEED HER. THE VITAMINS IS ONE TABLE SPOON EVERY MORNING ONLY. CAN YOU TAKING A BATH FOR MY CAT, EVERY MORNING TOO. THANK YOU FOR TAKING GOOD CARE OF MY CAT. SINCERLY YOURS, ERIZ
I WRITE A LETTER FOR YOU,
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BECAUSE
I HAD BUSINESS FOR A WEEK.
SUDDENLY
, I AM GOING OUTSIDE IN MY
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HOUSE
. I WILL GO TO THE
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BATANGAS
TO
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HANLDE
MY BUSINESS. I WILL STAY AT HOTEL DE LUNA,
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NASUGBU
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BATANGAS
WITH ROOM NO. 301 AND THEIR PHONE NO. IS 0917312181. YOU CAN CONTACT ME THIS PHONE NO. WHILE ON MY BUSINESS TRIP IN
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BATANGAS
. CAN YOU TAKE CARE OF MY CAT
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SISI
,
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BECAUSE
THEY CAN NOT
The verb 'CAN' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
GOING
WITH ME. HERE
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SOME
INSTRUCTIONS HOW TO HANDLE MY CAT. THE FOODS AND VITAMINS IS ON THE UPPER CABINET IN THEIR CAGE,
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THERES
ONE CABINET
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ONLY
. FEED THEIR MORNING LUNCH AND EVENING, GIVE HER WATER WHEN YOU FEED HER. THE VITAMINS
You should probably use: "are".
IS
ONE TABLE SPOON EVERY MORNING
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ONLY
. CAN YOU TAKING A BATH FOR MY CAT, EVERY MORNING TOO. THANK YOU FOR TAKING
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
GOOD
CARE OF MY CAT.

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SINCERLY
YOURS,
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ERIZ

IELTS letter A FRIEND HAS AGREED TO LOOK YOUR CAT WHILE YOU ARE AWAY FOR A WEEK ON BUSINESS

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  American English
2 paragraphs
147 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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