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A group of teenagers are going to visit my country.

A group of teenagers are going to visit my country. VPYJ3
Dear Jamie, I’m writing to answer your letter about your sister and her friend's trip to our country. First of all, I’d like you to know that I’m really grateful that you’ve suggested to others about the country I live in and the possibility of visiting the most beautiful places in Moldova. Their trip can be started with the heart of Chisinau, the capital of Moldova, where they will see the monument of Stefan the Great, Opera and Ballet Theatre, , Maria Biesu”, the Metropolitan Cathedral, Triumphal arch, etc. The best means of transport are buses and trolleybuses. It has its own route and its stops at the station according to their route. So, arriving in the center of the city, they have to be attentive to the number of the transport. In addition, to succeed to visit all the places they have planed, they should set off at 9 am and, if they have visited everything, then they would have a return journey at 6 – 7 pm. I hope this information will help and will intrigue them. Anyway, that’s all for now. Waiting for your response, Madalina
Dear Jamie,

I’m writing to answer your letter about your sister and her friend's trip to our country.

First of all
, I’d like you to know that I’m
really
grateful that you’ve suggested to others about the country I
live
in and the possibility of visiting the most
beautiful
places in Moldova.

Their trip can be
started
with the heart of Chisinau, the capital of Moldova, where they will
see
the monument of Stefan the Great, Opera and Ballet
Theatre
,
,
Maria
Biesu
”, the Metropolitan Cathedral, Triumphal arch, etc.

The best means of transport are buses and trolleybuses. It has its
own
route and its
stops
at the station according to their route.
So
, arriving in the center of the city, they
have to
be attentive to the number of the transport.

In addition
, to succeed to visit all the places they have planed, they should set off at 9 am and, if they have visited everything, then they would have a return journey at 6 – 7 pm.

I hope this information will
help
and will intrigue them.

Anyway, that’s all for
now
.

Waiting for your response,

Madalina
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IELTS letter A group of teenagers are going to visit my country.

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188 words
6.0
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