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YOUE NEIGHBOURS HAVE RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR HOUSEFLAT

YOUE NEIGHBOURS HAVE RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR HOUSEFLAT G3JPQ
I WROTE THIS LETTER TO YOU FOR MY EXPLANATION WHY WE ARE SO NOISY RECENTLY, DUE TO THE FACT THAT MY HOUSEFLAT ARE SO MANY DAMAGED LIKE MY WINDOW, DOORS AND EVEN MY CABINET. THE FOSET HAD A LEAK. WE HAD TO FIX THEM FOR OUR SAFETY. SO THAT I CALL A CARPENTER AND LABORER TO HELP ME TO FIX THE BROKEN IN MY HOUSEFLAT. THEY NEED SOME EQUIPMENT LIKE HAMMER AND GRINDER JUST TO SETTLE MY ROOM. I SINCERELY APOLOGIZED WHAT BRINGS A NOISE IN OUR APARTMENT. THIS IS NOT MY INTENTIONALY TO GIVE A NOISE. I JUST WANT TO FIX AND BEUATIFICATION OF MY DAMAGED ROOM. IN THE NEXT FEW DAYS I WILL TALK TO MY CARPENTER AND LABORER TO MAKE IT FAST THEIR WORK. THAT THE NOISY WILL END UP IMMEDIATELY. SINCERELY YOURS, ATAT
I WROTE THIS LETTER TO YOU FOR MY EXPLANATION WHY WE ARE
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SO
NOISY RECENTLY, DUE TO THE FACT THAT MY
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HOUSEFLAT
ARE
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SO
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MANY
DAMAGED LIKE MY WINDOW, DOORS AND EVEN MY CABINET. THE
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FOSET
HAD A LEAK. WE HAD TO
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FIX
THEM FOR OUR SAFETY.
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SO
THAT I CALL A CARPENTER AND LABORER TO
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HELP
ME TO
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FIX
THE BROKEN IN MY
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HOUSEFLAT
. THEY NEED
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SOME
EQUIPMENT LIKE HAMMER AND GRINDER
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JUST
TO SETTLE MY ROOM.

I
SINCERELY
APOLOGIZED WHAT BRINGS A NOISE IN OUR APARTMENT. THIS IS NOT MY
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INTENTIONALY
TO GIVE A NOISE. I
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JUST
WANT TO
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FIX
AND
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BEUATIFICATION
OF MY DAMAGED ROOM.

IN THE
NEXT
FEW DAYS I WILL TALK TO MY CARPENTER AND LABORER TO
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MAKE
IT
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FAST
THEIR WORK. THAT THE NOISY WILL
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END
UP IMMEDIATELY.

SINCERELY
YOURS,

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ATAT

IELTS letter YOUE NEIGHBOURS HAVE RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR HOUSEFLAT

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  American English
5 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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