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You have ordered a book by post.yet you have not received the book.

You have ordered a book by post. yet you have not received the book. 56rjP
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about creating delay in delivery of the book that Ordered by me on dated 18. 03. 21 against reference no PTU1234 from your shop. Although till 27. 03. 21 was last reach to me as stated by you. While, till 02. 04. 21 expecting and looking my percel. I have exam in near future. So, This book is much vital for me to crack paper because it contains shraight and short techniques that are very easy and enough to make a huge difference in small period of time. On the other hand neither you provide volume nor picking up calls. Atleast, this kind of looseness is not expected from you. There are number of showrooms that also offer same book within similar price range. Lastly, as you failed to give service within bound time limits. I look forward to purchase from them. Additionally they deliver goods under 100 km redius just in two working days which suits me too. Now, please return money in my account and assured timely response in future for better relations. Hoping a positive reply from you. Your Sincerely, James
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about creating delay in delivery of the book that Ordered by me on dated 18. 03. 21 against reference no PTU1234 from your shop. Although till 27. 03. 21 was last reach to me as stated by you. While, till 02. 04. 21 expecting and looking my
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percel
. I have exam in near future.
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So
, This book is much vital for me to crack paper
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because
it contains
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shraight
and short techniques that are
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very
easy and
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enough
to
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make
a huge difference in
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small
period of time.
On the other hand
neither you provide volume nor picking up calls.
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Atleast
, this kind of looseness is not
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expected
from you. There are number of showrooms that
also
offer same book within similar price range.
Lastly
, as you failed to give service within bound time limits. I look forward to
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purchase
from them.
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Additionally
they deliver
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goods
under 100 km
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redius
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just
in two working days which suits me too.
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Now
,
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please
return money in my account and assured timely response in future for better relations. Hoping a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply from you.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
James

IELTS letter You have ordered a book by post. yet you have not received the book.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
194 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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