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invitation letter to afriend

invitation letter to afriend JLwLE

Dear friend I am writing to invite you to our family party, which is organized on 16th of January at 6. 00 p. m. It is my son's first birthday and we decided to celebrate it with relatives and close friends. I haven't seen you for ages. And this event will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. Please, bring your kids also. Because this party is devoted to children. We are planning to organize several games and shou for kids. There will be music and dance shou. A dinner will be arranged to make the event more enjoyable. There will be cakes, ice cream and sweets for kids. Please, confirm your availability. I would be grateful if you come with your kids. Best wishes Julia

Dear friend

I am writing to invite you to our family party, which is organized
 on 16th of January at 6. 00 p. m.

It is my son's first
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).birthday, and
birthday and
 we decided to celebrate it with relatives and close friends.

I haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you for ages. And this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, bring your kids also
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 this party is devoted
 to children.

We are planning to organize several games and Possible spelling mistake found.showthoushotshopshoeshout
shou
 for kids. There will be music and dance Possible spelling mistake found.showthoushotshopshoeshout
shou
. A dinner will be arranged
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 more enjoyable. There will be cakes, ice cream and sweets for kids.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, confirm your availability. I would be grateful if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with your kids.

Best wishes

Julia

IELTS letter invitation letter to afriend

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

126 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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