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invitation letter to afriend

invitation letter to afriend JLwLE
Dear friend I am writing to invite you to our family party, which is organized on 16th of January at 6. 00 p. m. It is my son's first birthday and we decided to celebrate it with relatives and close friends. I haven't seen you for ages. And this event will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. Please, bring your kids also. Because this party is devoted to children. We are planning to organize several games and shou for kids. There will be music and dance shou. A dinner will be arranged to make the event more enjoyable. There will be cakes, ice cream and sweets for kids. Please, confirm your availability. I would be grateful if you come with your kids. Best wishes Julia
Dear friend

I am writing to invite you to our family party, which
is organized
on 16th of January at 6. 00 p. m.

It is my son's
first
birthday and
we decided to celebrate it with relatives and close friends.

I haven't
seen
you for ages. And this
event
will be a great opportunity for seeing each other.
Please
, bring your kids
also
.
Because
this party
is devoted
to children.

We are planning to organize several games and
shou
for kids. There will be music and dance
shou
. A dinner will
be arranged
to
make
the
event
more enjoyable. There will be cakes, ice cream and sweets for kids.

Please
, confirm your availability. I would be grateful if you
come
with your kids.

Best wishes

Julia
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IELTS letter invitation letter to afriend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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