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Introducing about yourself

Introducing about yourself R0LG8

Hello teacher and everyone, my name is Leon I'm 16 years old. now I'm a student at a high school. I'm part of an extended family and now I'm living with my mom my dad my grandparents and my uncle's family, they are all very nice and willing to support me when I am in difficulty. as you know, I'm an extrovert and when it comes to leisure time I love spending time hanging out with my friends, going to cafe or attending many social activities as my school. it give me a good chance to relax after many days of working hard. I also have passion for playing sport with my classmates after school such a badminton volleyball and so on, it make me feel more energetic and help me to keep fit and stay healthy.

Hello teacher and everyone, my name is Leon I'm 16 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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now
 I'm a student at a high school. I'm part of an extended family and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I'm living with my mom my dad my grandparents and my uncle's family, they are all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice and willing to support me when I am in difficulty. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
 you know, I'm an extrovert and when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
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 to leisure time I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 spending time hanging out with my friends, going to 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 or attending This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 social activities as my school. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
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give
 me a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 chance to relax after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 days of working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. I also
 have passion for playing sport with my classmates after school such a badminton volleyball and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 on, it Did you mean "makes"?makes
make
 me feel more energetic and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 fit and stay healthy. 