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APPLICATION FOR CIVIL AND STRUCTURE ENGINEER POSITION

APPLICATION FOR CIVIL AND STRUCTURE ENGINEER POSITION 6Kenr
Dymphna Balangkit Beverly Hills Apartment, Phase 5, Jln Bundusan, Penampang 88300 Kota Kinabalu, Sabah, Malaysia 2nd January 2021 To: Human Resources Manager Dear Sir / Madam, APPLICATION FOR CIVIL AND STRUCTURE ENGINEER POSITION I am writing to apply for position as Civil Engineer in your company. I have graduated in Civil and Structural Bachelor Degree Engineering at Universiti Teknologi Malaysia. Currently I am working with consultant firm as a Civil Engineer Petareka Perunding Sdn Bhd. With the experience and skills of ten (10) years working in building, civil and structure engineering, I believe it will be beneficial to your company, in term of high standards of work delivery, and able to rise and adapting to and challenge of managing adversity and problem arise in a high performing company. 2. I am dedicated individual who can provide unique approach to your organization. An opportunity for an interview we be greatly appreciated. 3. Enclosed here is my curriculum vitae that describes further about the above-mentioned activities and my background. I can be reached at +60168220514 or by email (dymphna85@gmail. com). Thank you for your time and consideration. sincerely, Dymphna Balangkit
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Balangkit


Beverly
Hills Apartment, Phase 5,
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Jln
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Bundusan
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Penampang
88300
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Kota
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Kinabalu
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Sabah
, Malaysia 2nd January 2021

To: Human Resources Manager

Dear Sir / Madam,

APPLICATION FOR
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CIVIL
AND STRUCTURE ENGINEER POSITION

I am writing to apply for position as
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Civil
Engineer in your
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company
. I have graduated in
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Civil
and Structural Bachelor Degree Engineering at
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Universiti
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Teknologi
Malaysia.
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Currently
I am working with consultant firm as a
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Civil
Engineer
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Petareka
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Perunding
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Sdn
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Bhd
. With the experience and
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skills
of ten (10) years working in building,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
civil
and structure engineering, I believe it will be beneficial to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, in term of high standards of work delivery, and able to rise and adapting to and challenge of managing adversity and problem arise in a high performing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

2. I
am dedicated
individual who can provide unique approach to your organization. An opportunity for an interview we be
greatly
appreciated.

3. Enclosed here is my curriculum vitae that
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describes
further
about the above-mentioned activities and my background. I can
be reached
at +60168220514 or by email (dymphna85@gmail.
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com
). Thank you for your time and consideration.

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sincerely
,

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Dymphna
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Balangkit
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IELTS letter APPLICATION FOR CIVIL AND STRUCTURE ENGINEER POSITION

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  American English
10 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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